Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Boom!!!!!!!! what was that?, there is dust in the air. Oh my God Something hit the church!. Oh no a church bombing. Joetta is in the church, I have to save her. I'm running desperately to the Church. I saw a black shoe, and four little girls lying on the grass dying. I started to pull on the black shoe thinking it was Joetta, I was so scared. It wouldn't come out, then I looked up and I saw it and said no not yet I need to spend more time with her. What I had just saw was more frighting then the frozen dead people getting picked up by a fake garbage trucks story , what I saw was a woolpooh. I was thinking and also hoping that woolpooh was not here for a Watson. As soon as I went home I stared to cry thinking about Joetta. The door open I heard Joetta call my name, I didn't want to look up, I was to scared because I thought that the woohpool would have a string around her waist taking to see her family for the last time. I was wrong but I was glad that I was wrong about the woolpooh having a string around Joetta's waist; taking her on her last seeing off her family. When I saw Byron he had a little man to man talk with me about how brave it was to go into the church and about what I saw, the woolpooh. When we got home to Flint Michingan we got word from grandma sands that the four little girls I saw past away and that the bombing was a racism event by the white man. I started to cry again as it sadden my heart that four little girls, four innocent girls lost their lives because of the color of their skin. How ignorant and wicked that is? I was angry at what happened and for the family's of the four little girls. I am sincerely sorry. And, I am thankful for Joetta still being alive and, by the way she didn't go to sabbath school, she thought that she saw me and started to look for me. That is what happened in the Wastsons go to Birmingham book when they went to birmingham, and its based on a true story.

3 comments:

  1. THe story is good
    did you write in character

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  2. this was amzin gud job frm chelsea

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